Fuck I cant write....

This shit is bringing me down. I know the guy is just trying to help, but I have no idea what I'm doing. How the hell am I supposed to describe some one stereotypical, WHEN THEY ARE!!!? How am I supposed to make something not cleche when its supposed to be this way? We are talking about revenge... how much more cleche can you fucking get? He suggested I write something shorter... I DONT KNOW HOW. I just go and write... if it comes out one way its how it comes out. I re-write and re-write what the hell am I doing wrong?

Fuck publishing anything. I should have just stuck to my first instinct and just wrote for me... fuck everyone else...